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I loved the imagery and, all in all, this is a really great poem. it held my attention from beginning to end, the ending, itself, was definitely worthy of the ...

I agree that the "Oh my God" was sort of dull, but all in all it was very creative. i didn't notice the HOME EMOH thing at all until it ...

Wow. I liked this one. The ending certainly was the worthiest part of the poem - somehow you have a way of making the most remincient and boring situations interesting. ...

1) because it's wordy, add more line breaks 2) use "and" instead of "&" 3) delete the repeat of "memory" from the thrid paragraph otherwise, i LOVED the imagery and ...

i loved the rhyme and the rhythm and the entire fact that you could support a beautiful meaning within such a beautiful work of art with words. the use of ...

the rhythm died very early in the poem and the rhyme was very forced. and the calorie chart was utterly random.... the beginning and the ending were far better. you ...

i agree with the others - but i must also just include one more critic: A paper hmmm… Could it be? Something to place my terrible thoughts on without hurting ...

i certainly feel at a loss. i can't help but vouch for the other side, though - i believe this was a very good poem. i'm not particularly disgusted by ...

i thought the first stanza was beautiful, mainly this line: that this is the start of forever, all the way to the bitter end. the second stanza also caught my ...

the title is great and really just sprouted a million meanings into my head. on top of that, the poem was wonderful. i was really sucked into the first three ...

umm does this poem have a meaning? do the trolls and billings and such and such represent something? because if they did, i didn't get it. on top of that, ...

it was a bit choppy, but i really do love your poetry. it's very descriptive but still holds purpose and point. intravenous rain clouds wow. and the last stanza - ...

(sorry so short but i don't have much time.) i loved these parts: the spirits stirring their gentling faces turn The ruined brick dwellings dripping with dead never to be ...

well, this was a rather awkward poem, though the ending was really good. but announcing your characters before hand... - maybe it would've been better if you explained more by ...

ehh i guess i would understand it more if i knew the back story to it. it was rather brief and didn't strike a chord with me. i got the ...